how does my rap lyrics sound? be honest i just started and need to know from mistakes i make?
im just starting out with this rap shit
gotta make my mark before i get left
in the dark 100 percent australian holdin
onto this medallion white sandy beaches
so many good features hustlers on the block
on hand on the glock other on the rock sellin
that shit even when the blocks hot we like to
leave the feds in shock coz aint know stoppin
a gee motherfukas tryin to handcuff a brother
throw em in the cell id rather be livin in hell
thug livin hood reppin motherfuka aint no stoppin
me aussie pride all the way queensland just gone
down in history white air force ones and a freash
white-tee yeah thats me who am i when its do or die
pull the trigga watch the shells dump and the bodys fly
u cant stop the bleeding to the chest i sugest u get a
teflon vest i look to then sky woundering when its my turn
to die but only god knows the answer to that underground
in the game i dont want the fame.
thats all i have wrote so far, advice would be great
thanks
^ never use the word sing with rap or else!!!!!
Its alright flow aint that big of a deal either if ur lyrical
The rhyme pattern is un even its straighttho good if ur a beginner
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